body paragraph 2 & 3.

assalamualaikum..now lets talk about my paragraph 2 & 3. As usual it have a mistake like grammar, unsuitable words and others. It is unbelievable if we don't make any mistake in our essay right? For this body paragraph we had try to do it with less mistake by referring to some of our friend before we show it to teech. It is use full because teech command that our body paragraph is good but some grammar mistake. Thank you to teech. And sorry for the picture because we make so small until teech say it look weird.

 Don't wory teech it just draft, so we will make it better like this one in the true body paragraph.

 

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